Hello readers ,
Sorry i have not posted in so long but i will post from this day on so what i am sharing with you guys my class and i were told to write piece on what thought happend in the story so i did and now i poped it on here so you could read it comment on what you thought and i could improve on what have written 2-weeks ago.
That’s a good snake says the snake-man as the snake slithers into the bag giving up on trying escape from him i look back to the kids and Mrs fuller and say he has got the snake! That jump up in excitement but what about jack said the little girl i say he is ok! even tho the dog was bitten by the snake. I felt bad for lying but i did not want to hurt the girl and the boy’s feelings that poor dog was probably just chilling on the sofa and the green mamba just came up to him at bite him. Mr fuller goes in and takes the body of the dead dog and takes it to the backyard without the kids seeing he buried him and came back out to his family i smile to the snake -man and head of and sit with them to.
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